Cloud Nine

[Gaby Brogan]

This is amazing. I love that haunting echo of the last line "As the last lights go out…" Very fitting and a strong final image

[Seajade]

Thanks Gaby ✨glad you enjoyed reading this…cheers Sea 😊🙏

[Gub]

The tension seems to lie in the grasping, cruel misery, no goodie in the white hat to save the day.

Cloud nine doesn’t even do the trick!

Written genuinely and reveals the deep care within :)

[Seajade]

Thank you Gub for your understanding which was spot on the money and as always for sharing, that’s much appreciated, Sea 😊🙏✨

[Nora O’Dowd]

Searing, Sea. Seems like the last shreds of illusion have been bloodied. You say it so well.🙏🙏🙏

[Seajade]

I think we are left exposed as powerless or complacent or complicit and it begs the question which is it to be ? Thanks for sharing ✨

[Azure Jo Storm | Poet]

This has such beautiful imagery and calming flow, I truly enjoyed reading this!

[Seajade]

Thanks glad you enjoyed reading it thanks for commenting always a pleasure to get feedback. Appreciate you 😊🙏

[Andrew Rosetta]

Thank you SeaJade it feels like the voice of someone who could look away — but chooses not to. There’s courage in that. Your refusal to numb or float above the world reads as deep care, not despair. Staying awake, seeing clearly

[wildflower]

This is fantastic, Sea!! 🖤

[Seajade]

Thanks and as always thanks again for sharing ✨

[wildflower]

Of course!! ❤️🫶🏻😘