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Seajade's avatar

@Stephen Riddell thanks for sharing Stephen appreciate it 😊🙏

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No worries, I thought it was pretty cool!

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Thanks 🙏

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

A wonderful journey! Bright, playful, poetic. perfectly lovely!

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Loved this one Sea! Each stanza was like a little window int the journey. The internal rhymes and wordplay were so much fun and really satisfying to read.

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Thanks Alex 😊🙏

Jon Gibbs's avatar

That’s lovely. 😀😀

Anomie's avatar

“Bees seeing in ultraviolet, declaring our bright shirts to be surrogate flowers, hitch hike a ride to their next pollen laden restaurant not yet warmed enough to fly.”

This is stunning Seajade I love the way you play with language

Seajade's avatar

Thanks that’s kind of you. wordplay? Yeah I’ve always loved that, also helps to keep my aging brain active 😁🧠

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Love the flow...perfect day.

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Thanks Ray 😊🙏

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Thanks Jon 😊🙏