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Alex J's avatar

This couldn’t be more perfect Sea. The word voices and flow were impeccable as always.. great one to read aloud.

Seajade's avatar

Thanks for sharing and taking time for feedback Alex…alas my voice is too time raddled to speak out loud, but in my head?

It sings

Lily of Oz's avatar

I’ve never understood the climbing to fame thing. The need to reach and reach and stretch your neck to try and meet eye to eye with the (self) chosen ones, not something I’ve ever understood.

Perhaps if we throw the world stage a long thunderous applause, we can bring that stinking house down.

Anywho I’m glad the dog got saved. I’ll just be over here with a cuppa recuperating. ☕️

Seajade's avatar

😵‍💫😁😁🖤

Seajade's avatar

The dogs doing fine, a little traumatised but we booked her a holiday in Benidorm…expect she’ll come back pissed clutching a stuffed rafia donkey and shouting Olé at sundry passersby 😁🙏😘

Lily of Oz's avatar

That’ll be me in old age, but without the grog because I’m a monster on that stuff. I might change the raffia donkey for a fox plushie and just yip at passerbys. 😜

Willow's avatar

Oh I absolutely love this! You have a fantastic way with the flow of words and emotion.Why do I read everything you write in a very northern british accent?..seriously..it just happens and I cannot attach it to anything. 🤣🥰

Seajade's avatar

I really don’t have a northern accent though I can do one, but you read away in whatever you want 😂😘

Willow's avatar

🤣 I'm intrigued as to your accent or maybe it's better left unsaid! Haha my brain literally does it, out of my control!

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

A perfect venting and thoroughly deserved SeaJade!

And honestly, the best use of the glorious rhubard I've seen in a very long time - as a word!

Seajade's avatar

The next one’ll be quieter Mark, hopefully 🤞 as for what you’ve been up to with Rhubarb? The mind boggles 😵‍💫😁

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

👀

😂

The only rhubarb I truly know if rhubarb and custard, and I can still him the melody now!

Seajade's avatar

love that show 😊 cheers Mark

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

I loved how it holds theatre and metaphor without losing its raw pulse - like something written from inside the heart, but already shaped into literature.

Seajade's avatar

Thanks Jeanne,✨ that’s a lovely comment…trying to be lighter with the editing…🖤🙏😘

Julia Minutillo's avatar

Look. I't had to be said. And it was fun. And I'm sure you guys had fun too. Enjoy playing Sir's. Trust. X

Virginia Curtis's avatar

This is so well-metered and expressed.The anger and the disdain came through loud and clear! Love, Virg