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Gabriel B.'s avatar

The glitter-ball line gives this a nice strange sparkle.

Seajade's avatar

Yeah I liked that too, just sorta popped up from nowhere, weird huh?

thanks Gabriel ✨😊🙏

Linda Blatnik's avatar

this speaks for so many!

i broke that rhythm, but it could have easily been mine. love ŧhe poem.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Love the poem and story here Jade! And the divorce release at the end, a perfect happy ending!

Seajade's avatar

Thanks Mark ✨ and thank you for sharing 🙏😘😊

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

The cadence of this one — swift, sure strokes — bring her to life. Bravo, Sea!

Seajade's avatar

Thanks Nora ✨for all the support. For commenting and sharing and just you know, being an all round good egg! It’s very much appreciated 😊🙏😘

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Ah, thank you! And I appreciate all you do, Sea!!!

Rea de Miranda's avatar

"She goes running for the shelter of her mother's little helper

And it helps her on her way, gets her through her busy day."

The Rolling Stones.

Well written!

Seajade's avatar

Thanks Rea✨She was asked once by Tom Jones at the bar after his gig if she wanted a kiss. Him in his arrogance expecting her to say yes. She very politely told him to fuck off…she was a feisty package 😁😂😊

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I commend her for that!

Sunshine's avatar

This is so raw and honest. The way you capture the quiet pressures and expectations of that era, and the cost it took on women, really resonates. I’m glad your stepmother found her freedom and some peace in the end. Thank you for sharing this.

Seajade's avatar

Thanks Sunshine✨I was young watched it all and I guess took notes, it certainly stayed with me.

but she too was young and had to endure it all and in those times there was little support or escape.

Her character was forged in what turned out to be a mistake on her part. I’m glad she got to meet someone better to love, she surely deserved to find happiness. Thanks for reading and commenting, means a lot to get feedback 😘Sea