Toss a coin into a wishing well… It plummeted straight, no ricochet, seemingly endless in fateful silence. The world stood waiting hesitant, fingers crossed, hushed breath expectant. A sliver of moonlight, glinting snake-eyed, coldly smiling over my shoulder, lit it up a faint tumbling gleam as it fell helpless, into that arc of black water.
PS - I love the birds in the second audio clip. They sound like the tiniest little babies and I’m so glad I got to hear them and They’re from another continent. Thank you.
Yes! This totally felt like I became the falling coin. It was a very surreal experience, your language and choice of words are remarkable!!
Thanks for sharing…writing it felt like that too…great fun to write, a bit of an emotional adventure. Appreciate you 😊🙏
Amazing stuff Sea! I loved the little sound design elements and the stanza after the first picture was particularly incredible 👌
Thanks Alex, playing around with different styles and ideas
Glad you enjoyed it 😊🙏😘
That was an amazing read. It was like a 4D experience, your words, the images, the sounds! Brilliant!
Thanks 😊🙏
They say falling in the lap of Shiva is like falling into a bottomless well...you enjoy the dive without the fear of the thump...
Total immersion. Thank you, Sea!!
Thanks Nora 😘😊🙏
PS - I love the birds in the second audio clip. They sound like the tiniest little babies and I’m so glad I got to hear them and They’re from another continent. Thank you.
Well done
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