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Tony McNichol's avatar

"she’s stitched us up like a right fucking pair of kippers”

Have these particular words ever been uttered in each other's company in a sentence since the dawn of human kind? Hahaha! Love it

Seajade's avatar

Very original bank robbers 😁glad you had fun 🙏😊😘

Jacinta: One Page at a Time's avatar

I love the trippy way you treated the time travel, which of course can allow for another trip to leave the things your characters need where they can grab them (i've used that trick myself ) and the dialogue - very British.

Seajade's avatar

Thanks Jacinta ✨well I am very British so I wanted to reflect that in a playful way. I had great fun with this and left it open for further adventures. Thanks for the feedback, it’s valuable and always much appreciated 🖤🙏😊

Jacinta: One Page at a Time's avatar

Great - very British too

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Wonderful! Reading and listening, I'm again struck by your never-ending innovation and exploration. Hope to run into the characters again!

Seajade's avatar

Well they did leave the possibility open…so maybe they’ll turn up again…probably when we least expect it 🤪😁 thanks Nora ✨😊🙏😘

Alex J's avatar

Haha was already enjoying but realised I missed the music. Proper cracked up when it came on 😂

Seajade's avatar

I have great fun matching the music with the words tbh…Pixabay is great for mungos like me and my characters 😵‍💫🤪🙃😘

Virginia Curtis's avatar

That was fun. Love, Virg.