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Leonorra Dainler's avatar

Beautiful! You still can wake up there .. just go within and remember and relive.. ❤️

Deb Gottner's avatar

I love what you did with language in this piece — The internal rhyme and The rhythm. Captures The attitudes within the poem. I am a sucker for puns, and this line in particular:

I was born in an old curiosity shop

down by the river

_razed_ by the city down to the ground

now there’s a wasteland

The use of the word "raised" is brilliant and my brain is holding so much with that one word. There are no words. Well, there are, but I can't come up with them right now. 🫤

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